Thursday, November 29, 2007

judgment

to all the law enthusiasts, boy have i got just the thing for you!

here is my judgment. i just put the finishing touches onto it. *proud*
do look through it and tell me what u think.
what i really mean is: my assignment is due on monday, so hurry up and be done editing it by saturday so that i can print it.
click on the button below to read it.

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2 comments:

Caranthir Narmolanya said...

What an honour! Reading Her Ladyship Amy's judgment! :P

We were always advised to ask someone to proof read our material!! lol

Word of caution,... the following were stated as a matter of opinion and should be read as entertainment and not facts. By reading the following, you are disclaiming the author of all liabilities and consequences. :P

Some things to take note...

At,

[3] ..Mary was impliedly approving of their sexual relationship...

I think approving should either be replaced with '..impliedly in approval of...' or the 'of' should be omitted

[4] (c) reasonable to be replaced with reasonably

You'd prolly have picked this up after proof-reading urself... :D

Same paragraph: Her actions of ..... was ( should be were ) subtly....

[5] in favor of the defendant ( favor is the American spelling I think)

[8] Is the reasoning in relation to the 'but for' test? What is the 'but for' test in more specific terms? :S I haven't done crim before so i dunno :P Is it advisable to write a paragraph perhaps on the 'But For' Test and the requirements? Or is the explanation u provided sufficient?

[10] Per definition (2), can reading up on information about sex etc not be an event or activity that affects one in some way?

I think sexual experience should have been contested under the grounds of the definition of sexual as sexual can also mean between sexes, and not necessarily sexual intercourse, but then again, it all matters on what was argued in the hearing right?

I personally feel that her intentions should be ascertained. (was there a cross examination or sth? :P )

But on the literal reading of sexual experience, it can mean being in a relationship and getting her son to understand sexuality more.

Could it have been argued that she had reasonably believed that cuddling and kissing might been ok?

In paragraph [3] u said 'She even commented that Stephen and Mary were behaving like anyone of their age would behave'. Was this behaviour referring to the sexual intercourse or the kissing and cuddling?

[12] she has gone beyond... ( I think has should be replaced with had )

[19]and her six months younger... ( did u mean she was )

[20] Behavior is the American spelling I think

[25] ...own way of education (did u mean educating?)...

[26] (2) typo at impartiality if the judiciary?

[30] Typo at submission if(of?) the defense....

Behavior/ Behaviour?

The sentence starting from completely sounds a bit incomplete... I think you should revise the sentence or just replace the fullstop with a coma .

Conclusion : I(n) this respect?

Behavior/Behaviour?

On sentencing, how did u decide 6 months? :P Is there an act that provides guidelines on the minimum and maximum sentence for offences of this nature?

Ok. Done.... damn this feels like doing an assignment again!!!

Yayy! I think at the end of the day, it doesn't matter whether the judgment u came to was right or wrong cos there isn't a right or wrong but it depends on your reasoning to your conclusion!

Good Luck!! Hope it helped! Bet it was fun writing this assignment yea? hahaha

Happy HOLIDAYS! wooot!

amb3r1te said...

gosh... thanks so much for bothering to give such detailed explanations and also for your opinions!

hmm... this assignment wasnt all that fun to me, but i bet u would have loved it! lol~

6 months is the maximum sentence that a magistrates court can give.

next week is my exams! hols my ass! haha~

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